In honor of our current assignment due this week for my Online Journalism class, I wanted to find an article in The New York Times website that depicted a story through a slide show of pictures and displaying the details with captions. “Smugglers of Drugs Burrow on Border” is the main article, but I would like to focus on the related slide show titled “Trafficking in the Southwest Goes Underground,” which tells the story of drug-smuggling tunnels in the city of Nogales, Arizona, which lies at the Mexican border. There are nine pictures altogether showing a range of tunnels, border patrol agents working on the job, as well as the border crossing between the U.S. and Mexico. This story is of interest to me because earlier this year, I visited El Paso, Texas, which borders Juarez, Mexico. Every night on the local El Paso TV news, there was a story regarding drug smuggling across the border. What I found strange was how the El Paso locals kept reminding my friend and I that the city of El Paso is safe even though Juarez is extremely dangerous, despite the two major cities being geographically located so close to each other. Still, my friend and I made sure to stay as far away as possible from the main border for our own safety. These pictures remind me of the video I saw on the news those nights. This is a critique of the pictures in the slide show.

Kevin Hecht, U.S. Border Patrol agent, investigating smuggling tunnel. Photo taken by Joshua Lott for The New York Times
The first picture is of a U.S. Border Patrol field operation supervisor standing in a tunnel. It’s a great birds-eye-view shot of him looking up and talking to someone standing outside of it. It’s at a nice angle and shows how deeply involved Border Patrol agents are on the job. The lighting, focus and color are perfect.

Storm drainage pipe used for smuggling across U.S. border. Photo taken by Joshua Lott, for The New York Times
The second shot is mainly a tunnel. I love the composition on this one, but it looks like it could have been cropped to fit the Rule of Thirds. The center of the black hole sits off-center towards the top right-hand corner of the frame. I’m wondering if extra lighting played a role in showing the length of the tunnel. The parts closer to the camera are more well-lit to show the darkness further inside the tunnel. If someone had shone a flashlight through the tunnel hole, it would have looked completely different because we would be able to see what’s inside. The lighting is a little harsh on this one. The caption on the side gives details on different types of tunnels. This tunnel is shown as an example of one of the tunnels used by smugglers.
The third picture is another birds-eye-view of a U.S. Border Patrol agent, this time standing next to a storm drainage. The focus in this picture is of debris, mostly comprised of old clothing and garbage. I think a ground level shot would be a better angle to show the pileup. The photographer could have climbed down the ladder and experimented with it a bit more (if not instructed to stay above).
The fourth picture shows a channel running the region to describe how the geography of the region plays a large part in cross-country smuggling. To me, this is not the most compelling picture. It acts as more of either an establishing shot or extra information. It conveys no emotion and does not show any humans. The caption on the side is definitely needed to explain the purpose of this shot.
I really love the fifth picture of U.S. Border Patrol agents on the job at the U.S. border crossing. The photographer made a great way to emphasize their power as agents by focusing the patch on the one agent’s jacket. It looks like natural sunlight hitting the patch at just the right angle. The shadows play a huge role in this picture in that you can’t see the full facial expression of the second agent (towards the left). However, it looks like the image was cropped to make sure that viewers can’t see the full facial expression of the first agent either, but his face is cut off so that you can only see his chin and part of his mouth. The sunlight is shining bright on the border-crossing lanes in the background which was blurred.
The sixth picture is pretty self-explanatory and not much is needed in the caption. The agents are inspecting a vehicle as part of their job. I like how they are in action. One thing I noticed is that the license plate was not blurred in any way. I’m not sure if that should be a concern. I don’t know if that is considered classified information. On reality TV shows, if the video photographer is filming in the car with the star of the show while he/she is driving, on the aired (edited) content, I believe other license plates of anonymous citizens’ cars are blurred.
In the seventh picture, there is a pole in the way of the main shot of an agent investigating a tunnel from ground surface. There is no special angle in which the picture was shot. However, the photographer blurred the pole to emphasize that the agents in the background are the main subjects. I’m glad the editor didn’t try to omit the pole. I do think a more interesting and creative angle would be for the photographer to get inside a tunnel himself and take a picture of an agent looking down into the camera. In this picture, you can’t even see the hole that’s being investigated because it is not in the shot. It was either not taken in the photo at all or else it was cropped out.
The eight picture was slightly rotated counter-clockwise. Why? I don’t really know. I don’t know if that’s the work of the photographer or editor. But I like how a direct quote from the agent is used in the caption. To me, it makes the photo of him standing halfway into a tunnel more active. The tunnel becomes a living thing because he’s describing what kinds of smuggling activities occur inside of it.
The last picture shows the actual U.S./Mexico border crossing. It’s a wide shot. The composition of the photo shows the border crossing lanes in the bottom right-hand corner of the frame with the Mexican flag at the top left-hand corner of the frame.
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